Sunday, October 30, 2011

Occupy revised

Occupy Wall Street
By Jolie Peters
(All italicized quotes are from signs held by protestors)
There are zen meditation circles, singing, camp sites, news reporters, and it wouldn’t be New York without the variety of Halal trucks surrounding Zuchotti park. As Roberto Anderson, a
Twenty-Three year old college graduate from upstate New York approached one of these Halal trucks to charge his cell phone he said, “The only thing I can possibly feel is hope. A month is nothing, just wait till we reach six.”  
  One month has indeed passed since people have been participating in the Occupy Wall Street Movements. These protests are the result of resentment that some Americans have had towards large corporations, banks, and the government, who in the protestors opinions, do not have the American people’s interest in mind.The occupation has included a variety of marches, that have occurred in New York City, and around the world. Despite the mass arrests and legal interventions, the occupation has made incredible headway since it began in September. The movement has not only spread to over a thousand cities, but it has gotten the attention of many politically important people as well.
How the Protest’s Began
“Lost my job, Found my occupation.”
In July of 2011, Adbusters, a non-for-profit, non-consumerist organization , as well as the New York General Assembly (NYGA), a compilation of groups set out to organize the occupation, put out a call to occupy Wall Street. They asked people to protest the fact that over the past few decades the majority of wealth in America has been in fewer and fewer hands, as well as the events that occurred leading up to and after the recession in 2008. When September 17th came, thousands of protesters began their march through the Financial District. After the police began blocking the march, protestors moved to the privately owned Zuchotti Park where they have stayed ever since. 
“I’m here because I have a feeling of personal responsibility. I don’t know if this movement is going to accomplish everything I want it to, but it goes along with what I believe has to happen so much that I needed to be here.” Said Jordan McCarthy, from New Hampshire. She sat with her friends and Beagle puppy Tucker on the steps of Zuchotti Park as she carefully explained her reasons for traveling to New York in order to protest. The media has painted the face of the protestors as young politically naive individuals. 
“By late morning on Wednesday, Occupy Wall Street, a noble but fractured and airy movement of rightly frustrated young people, had a default ambassador in a half-naked woman who called herself Zuni Tikka,” wrote Ginia Bellafante in a piece for the New York Times. “The group’s lack of cohesion and its apparent wish to pantomime progressivism rather than practice it knowledgeably is unsettling in the face of the challenges so many of its generation face....” 
While there are a fare share of young activists on Wall Street, there is a larger spectrum of people that make up the protestors. World War Two veteran, Eddie Davis, sat silently on a wooden bench, wearing his World War Two veteran hat and holding his hand-made sign. He observed his fellow protestors, on October 5th, during the union march in which the unions came to join those occupying. 
“I’m here because there needs to be a broad peoples movement. All of us affected by the same issue need to call for a meeting of interested parties,” Davis said. "In the 1930‘s there were unemployment councils organized throughout the country. The outcome of this was Social Security and Unemployment Insurance. We all need to ban together to see a change.”
There are a variety of events that have consequently sparked the feelings that brought people like Davis, and McCarthy down to the occupation.
The Creation of the 99%
“None are more Hopelessly Enslaved than those who believe they are free.”
 There have been a variety of events that have consequently sparked the feelings which allowed for the occupation to begin. Deregulation in banks has been occurring in America since the early nineties. The banking industry pushed for deregulation, or less monitoring of their transactions, and in 1999 congress passed bills legalizing it. After the bills were passed, bankers were able to give out large quantities of risky loans to American citizens. This lead America into a severe recession in 2008 because people who were issued these loans were unable to pay them back. During this time foreclosures began to skyrocket and banks were left with the loans unpaid, and real estate they were unable to sell. When the banks began to collapse due to this debt, the American Government passed bail out packages to save them. When the smoke finally cleared from the financial crisis, many CEO’s walked away with billions they had made prior to the recession, as well as bonus’s they received during the recession and afterwards. 
“There is an incredible anger and disillusionment with watching those executives in the upper 1% that contributed to the financial crisis walk away with bonuses when unemployment and poverty are at levels not seen in decades,” said Mary Borrowman, an Economics expert and teacher at The New School.
 On top of the feelings of disenfranchisement people felt after the recession, there is also high levels of resentment towards the income disparities that our country has been facing for decades. According to a report released by the Congress of the United State’s Congressional Budget Office, from 1979 until 2007 the average income for the top 1% has grown 275 percent. The people outside of the 1% have not seen their income grow higher than 65% since 1979.
Police and Legal Action
“We are not fish, put your nets away”
  From the start of the protests there has been clashes between police and occupiers. Video’s went viral on the internet of police officers brutally arresting, beating, and macing protestors. One of the videos depicts three young women standing on the side walk near an occupation march. When one of the woman pulled her camera out of her bag, a police officer in a white shirt stormed over to the side of the curb, and maced her as well as two other bystanders. The protestors in turn fell to the ground writhing in pain an screaming for help.
Some of these mass arrests occurred on October 5th during the march on the Brooklyn bridge where seven hundred people were arrested. Also, on October 15th 92 people were arrested during the march to Times square. 
According to the Partnership for Civil Justice, the police have been using a trap and detain tactic in which they use an orange net to surround the protestors.
 “I think the police officers just got desperate, took out their orange nets, and blocked off the (street) block,” said Yotam Marom, a recent graduate student from The New School, and activist who has been avidly participating in the occupation since the start. He said in regards to the Union March, which occurred on October 5th, “That was a intentional move to scare these people from coming out today. Parents that have kids can’t risk being arrested, people that have to go to work the next day can’t risk being arrested. I can risk being arrested.”
While some people may have been intimidated and scared by the police tactics, Jill Nelson, a writer and activist who has written books on police brutality, said that the police’s actions have actually raised awareness for Occupy Wall Street.
  “Ironically, the police violence, mass arrests, and overall ineptitude have done wonders for OWS in terms of getting the message and images out to a national and international audience...This is not to say that the demonstrations would not have continued and grown without the unintentional assistance of police and mainstream media, I think they would have, but the police violence and media coverage of it didn't hurt.,” Nelson said.
While some are incredibly outraged by the police’s actions thus far,
the police stand by their job and their tactics. During a press conference Raymond Kelley, the police commissioner, said, “We are a big organization and we have an obligation to maintain order.”
Because of these mass arrests, a large class action lawsuit has been filed by the Partnership for Civil Justice fund.
Political Response to Protests
“Obama is NOT a brown-skinned anti-war socialist who gives away free
healthcare...you’re thinking of Jesus.”
 The protests have not only gotten the attention of the media, but politicians have also turned their attention towards the protests.
Nancy Pelosi, a house minority leader said during an interview on October 9th for ABC’s This Week, “God bless them for their spontaneity. It’s independent... it’s young, it’s spontaneous, and it’s focused. And it’s going to be effective.”
The Republican presidential candidate Gary Johnson also sympathizes with the protestors, even though he blames different culprit than the protestors do for the problems America is facing. “Everybody is outraged over the inequity and I hope it gets focused on the fact that government perhaps is at the root of all of this, politicians are at the root of this,” said Johnson during an interview with 
  Although some political candidates agree with the protesting and hope for change, many have problems with it. Mayor Michael Bloomberg doesn’t just disagree with the what the protestors have to say, but he believes the protestors are going to ruin jobs in New York. "If you focus for example on driving the banks out of New York City, you know those are our jobs. Mayor Bloomberg said “What they’re trying to do is take away the jobs of people working in the city, take away the tax base that we have.”
Obviously I’ve heard of it. I’ve seen it on television. I think it expresses the frustrations that the American people feel -- that we had the biggest financial crisis since the Great Depression, huge collateral damage all throughout the country, all across Main Street, and yet you’re still seeing some of the same folks who acted irresponsibly trying to fight efforts to crack down on abusive practices that got us into this problem in the first place,” Said President Obama when asked if he has been following the movement. 
Growing in Size
“I won’t believe corporations are people until Texas executes one.”
  The protests have been continuously spreading. October 15th, right before the month anniversary of the protest’s start, was global action day. This called for people all over the country, and the world, to march for the cause. Prior to global action day, numbers of protestors had increased in New York, as well as spread to other cities including Los Angeles, Rome, Boston, Denver, and many more. Some of the goals are the same as those in New York, other differ.  
“I hope that this will help the government to see that the people are tired of electing officials just to have them pander to Wall Street,” said Chrystal Zimmerman who is occupying in Amarillo, Texas. “As far as our local movement we are still discussing what our local goals are. Obviously, we support the movement in New York and everywhere else, but we haven't really chiseled out our individual group's goals yet.”
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  The drum are still beating down at Zuchotti Park. There are still people there eating hummus on bread thanks to the food service table. There are still people burning sage, and doing Yoga. There are even still people using Halal trucks to charge their cell phones. At this juncture, it is hard to tell how much longer this movement will last. As the cold days are quickly approaching one can’t help but think, will the occupiers survive the winters jarring temperatures? For the time being, life goes on in Zuchotti park. Well, at least while there are still places to charge a cell phone. 

Thursday, October 27, 2011

Occupy Revised

Occupy Wall Street
By Jolie Peters
(All italicized quotes are from signs help by protestors)
Zuchotti Park in many ways has become a sanctum to the people who have been inhabiting it for the past month. There are zen meditation circles, singing, camp sites, and it wouldn’t be New York without the variety of Halal trucks surrounding the park. As Roberto Anderson, a Twenty-Three year old college graduate from upstate New York approached one of these Halal trucks to charge his cell phone he said, “The only thing I can possibly feel is hope. A month is nothing, just wait till we reach six.” 
One month has indeed passed since people have been participating in the Occupy Wall Street Movements. These protests are the result of resentment that some Americans have been feeling towards large corporations, banks, and the government for a period of time that largely exceeds a month. The occupation has included a variety of marches and protests, that have not only occurred in New York City, but around the world. Despite the mass arrests and legal interventions, the occupation has made incredible headway since it began in September. The movement has not only spread to over a thousand cities, but it has gotten the attention of many politically important people as well. 
How the Protest’s Began
“Lost my job, Found my occupation.”
Adbusters, a non-for-profit, non-consumerist organization , as well as the New York General Assembly (NYGA), a compliation of groups set out to organize the occupation, put out a call to occupy Wall Street. The call was asking people to protest the growing wage disparities between the 99 and 1%, as well as the events that occurred leading up to and after the recession in 2008. 
Adbusters and NYGA made many plans and provisions leading up to September 17th, the day the groups chose as the start of the protests. When September 17th came, thousands of protesters began their march through the Financial District. After the police began blocking the march, protestors moved to the privately owned Zuccotti Park where they have stayed ever since. 
People have come from all over the world to participate in New York and elsewhere. “Its time we get information out to people. We’re here protesting a global system that holds money more important than human life. People are saying the 99% don’t have a common goal? How is the whole 99% supposed to agree on a common problem when we’re each affected by the system in a different way?” Said Jordan McCarthy, from New Hampshire. She sat with her friends and Beagle puppy Tucker on the steps of Zuchotti Park as she carefully explained her reasons for traveling to New York in order to protest. 
The media has given a generalized face to the protestors, depiciting them as young politically active people. While there are a fare share of young activists on Wall Street, there is a larger spectrum of people that make up the protestors. Take for example Eddie Davis, a World War Two veteran. Davis sat silently on a wooden bench, wearing his World War Two veteran hat and holding his hand-made sign while observing his fellow protestors during the union march. Davis said, “I’m here because there needs to be a broad peoples movement. All of us affected by the same issue need to call for a meeting of interested parties. In the 1930’s there were unemployment councils organized throughout the country. The outcome of this was Social Security and Unemployment Insurance. We all need to ban together to see a change.”
There are a variety of events that have consequently sparked the feelings that brought people like Davis, and McCarthy down to the occupation. 
The Creation of the 99%
“None are more Hopelessly Enslaved than those who believe they are free.”
Deregulation has been occurring in America since the early nineties. The federal reserve and the banking industry pushed for deregulation, and in 1999 congress passed bills legalizing it. After the bills were passed, bankers were able to give out large quantities of risky loans. This in turn lead America into a severe recession in 2008. When people who were issued these loans were unable to pay them back, foreclosures began to skyrocket and banks were left not only with unpaid loans, but real estate they were unable to sell. When the banks began to collapse the American Government passed bail out packages to save them. When the smoke finally cleared from the financial crisis, many CEO’s walked away with billions they had made prior to the recession, as well as bonus’s they received during the recession and afterwards. 
“There is an incredible anger and disillusionment with watching those executives in the upper 1% that contributed to the financial crisis walk away with bonuses when unemployment and poverty are at levels not seen in decades,” said Mary
Borrowman, an Economics expert and teacher at The New School.
On top of the feelings of disenfranchisement people felt after the recession, there is also high levels of resentment towards the income disparities that our country has been facing for decades. According to a report released by the Congress of the United State’s Congressional Budget Office, from 1979 until 2007 the average income for the top 1% has grown 275 percent. The people outside of the 1% have not seen their income grow higher than 65% since 1979. 
Police and Legal Action
“We are not fish, put your nets away”
From the start of the protests there has been extreme clashing between police and occupiers. Video’s went viral on the internet of police officers macing young women who in turn fell to the ground screaming for help. There has also been videos released of police beating, and brutally arresting protestors.  Some of these mass arrests occurred during the march on the Brooklyn bridge where seven hundred were arrested. Also, 92 were arrested during the march to Times square. 
According to the Partnership for Civil Justice, the police have been using a trap and detain tactic in which they use an orange net to surround the protestors and then they arrest those who have been obtained.
“I think the police officers just got desperate, took out their orange nets, and
blocked off the (street) block,” said Yotam Marom, a recent graduate student from The New School, and activist who has been avidly participating in the occupation since the start. He said in regards to the Union March, which occurred on October 5th, “That was a intentional move to scare these people from coming out today. Parents that have kids can’t risk being arrested, people that have to go to work the next day can’t risk being arrested. I can risk being arrested.”
While some people may have been intimidated and scared by the police tactics,
Jill Nelson, a writer and activist who has written books on police brutality, sheds
light on the fact that the police’s actions have actually raised awareness for
Occupy Wall Street.
“Ironically, the police violence, mass arrests, and overall ineptitude have done wonders for OWS in terms of getting the message and images out to a national and international audience...This is not to say that the demonstrations would not have continued and grown without the unintentional assistance of police and mainstream media, I think they would have, but the police violence and media coverage of it didn't hurt.,” Nelson Said.
While some are incredibly outraged by the police’s actions thus far, the police
stand by their job and tactics used. During a press release conference Raymond Kelley, the police commissioner said, regarding the size of police contingent, “We think it is
appropriate for the issue. We facilitate peaceful protests that’s what we do. We
do it every day.”
Because of these mass arrests, a large class action lawsuit has been filed by the Partnership for Civil Justice fund. 
Political Response to Protests
“Obama is NOT a brown-skinned anti-war socialist who gives away free
healthcare...you’re thinking of Jesus.”
The protests have not only gotten the attention of the media, but political
officials have also turned their attention towards the protests. Nancy Pelosi, a house minority leader said during an interview on ABC’s This Week “God bless them for their spontaneity. It’s independent... it’s young, it’s spontaneous, and it’s focused. And it’s going to be effective.”
The Republican presidential candidate Gary Johnson also sympathizes
 with the those protesting. “Everybody is outraged over the inequity and I hope it gets focused on the fact that government perhaps is at the root of all of this, politicians are at the root of this,” said Johnson during an interview with CNN.
Although some political candidates agree with the protesting and hope for change, many have problems with it. Mayor Michael Bloomberg doesn’t just disagree with the what the protestors have to say, but he believes the protestors are going to ruin jobs in New York. "If you focus for example on driving the banks out of New York City, you know those are our jobs. What they’re trying to do is take away the jobs of people working in the city, take away the tax base that we have,” the mayor said.
As the protest grows in size, more and more political people are commenting on
the events taking place.
Growing in Size
“I won’t believe corporations are people until Texas executes one.”
October 15th, right before the month anniversary of the protest’s start, global action day was enacted. This called for people all over the country, and the
world, to march for the cause. Prior to global action day the number of protestors
had increased in New York, as well as spread to other cities. Many of the goals are the same as those in New York, other differ.
“I hope that this will help the government to see that the people are tired of
electing officials just to have them pander to Wall Street,” Said Chrystal Zimmerman who is occupying in Amarillo, Texas. “As far as our local movement we are still discussing what our local goals are. Obviously, we support the movement in New York and everywhere else, but we haven't really chiseled out our individual group's goals yet.”
The growth of the occupation does not seem to be slowing down anytime soon.
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The drum are still beating down at Zuchotti Park. There are still people there eating hummus on bread thanks to the food service table. There are still people burning sage, and doing Yoga. There are even still people using Halal trucks to charge their cell phones. At this juncture, it is hard to tell how much longer this movement will last. As the cold days are quickly approaching one can’t help but think, will the occupiers survive the winters jarring temperatures? For the time being, life goes on in Zuchotti park. Well, at least while there are still places to charge a cell phone. 

Sunday, October 23, 2011

Occupy (very rough edit)

Occupy Wall Street
By Jolie Peters
(All italicized quotes are from signs help by protestors)
As Roberto Anderson, twenty three from upstate New York, plugged his cell phone charger into one of the various Halal stands surrounding Zuchotti park he said, “The only thing I can possibly feel is hope. A month is nothing, just wait till we reach six.”  
One month as indeed passed since people have been participating in the Occupy Wall Street protests. Even though these protests began a month ago, they were the result of emotional unrest that some Americans have been feeling towards large corporations, banks, and the government for a period of time that largely exceeds a month. During this one month period there has been a variety of marches and protests occurring in New York City and around the world. The marches have resulted in mass arrests, and legal interventions. Despite the hardships that the protestors have faced, they have made incredible headway since they began in September. The movement has not only spread to over a thousand cities, but it has gotten the attention of many politically important people, which was a main goal for many protesting. 
The Creation of the 99%
“None are more Hopelessly Enslaved than those who believe they are free.” 
Deregulation has been occurring since America regained their financial infrastructure after the Great Depression. The federal reserve pushed for deregulation, and congress passed bills legalizing it. Prior to the financial bubble, which burst in 2008 leading America into a severe recession, bankers were giving out large quantities of risky loans. Derivatives, which were created during this period of increased deregulation, are complex mathematical equations that allow for bankers to bet on the loans they are distributing. Banks were in turn making money off of the these bets. When the people who were issued these loans were unable to pay them back, foreclosures began to skyrocket, and major banks were left with unpaid loans as well as real estate that they were unable to sell. The banks began to collapse and the American Government was forced to bail them out. Unfortunately these bail out packages were not solely used to pay the banks debts. Many major CEO’s of the banks received large bonus’s with the bail out money they were given. When the smoke finally cleared from the financial crisis, many CEO’s walked away with the billions they had made from the derivative bets. This created large wage disparities between the 1% of people in the upper echelon and the other 99%. 
“There is an incredible anger and disillusionment with watching those executives in the upper 1% that contributed to the financial crisis walk away with bonuses when unemployment and poverty are at levels not seen in decades,” said Mary Borrowman, an Economics expert and teacher and The New School. 
These events are what sparked the feelings of disenfranchisement, which in turn sparked the protests on Wall Street.
How the Protest’s Began
“Lost my job, Found my occupation.”
Adbusters, a non-for-profit non-consumerist organization, put out a call to occupy Wall Street in order to protest the disparities between the 99 and 1%. A series of calls from Adbusters, as well as the New York General Assembly, followed the first call for the occupation. During this time, other non-for-profit activist groups joined those who were spearheading the occupation. 
The organizations picked September 17th to be the day for the occupation to begin. In planning for the protests, the General Assembly made calls for food donations. 
Similar to the events that occurred in Egypt last year, the occupation was gaining notoriety by online social media sources. On September 13th OccupyWallstreet.org released a variety of resources that would help protestors. They had a pamphlet including various events, phone numbers for legal organizations, as well as protestors legal rights. 
On September 17th 5,000 protesters began marching through the Financial District. When the police began blocking the march, the protestors had an assembly to decide their next move. They decided to move to the privately owned Zuccotti Park, where they have stayed ever since. 
There is a large spectrum of people that make up the protestors. The vast amounts of signs help passerby’s understand the many different reasons people have for protesting. There is a large variety in age, race, and socio-economic background. People have come from all over the world to participate in New York and all over the elsewhere. The protests have been quickly growing ever since they began.
Police and Legal Action
“We are not fish, put your nets away”
From the start of the protests their has police been a police presence. Many of the interactions the police have had with the protestors has not been peaceful. Video’s went viral on the internet after police were filmed macing, beating, and brutally arresting individuals protesting. Some of these mass arrests occurred during the march on the Brooklyn bridge where seven hundred were arrested, and the march to Times Square where 92 were arrested. 
The police have been using a trap and detain tactic in which they use an orange net to surround the protestors and then they arrest those who have been surrounded. 
“I think the police officers just got desperate, took out their orange nets, and blocked off the block,”  Said Yotam Marom, a recent graduate student and activist who has been avidly participating in the occupation since the start. “That was a intentional move to scare these people from coming out today. Parents that have kids can’t risk being arrested, people that have to go to work the next day can’t risk being arrested. I can risk being arrested,” Marom included. 
While some people may have been intimidated and scared by the police tactics, Jill Nelson, a writer and activist who has written books on police brutality, sheds light on the fact that the police’s actions have actually raised awareness for Occupy Wall Street. 
It's old news that the bad press is no press, and I think as sour, superficial, and mean-spirited as much of the coverage of OWS by the corporate owned media has been, in the end it has served as an effective organizing tool in getting the word out to a broad audience,” Nelson Said.
While some are incredibly outraged by the police’s actions thus far, the police stand by their job and tactics used. 
During a press release Raymond Kelley, the police commissioner said, regarding the size of police contingent, “We think it is appropriate for the issue. We facilitate peaceful protests that’s what we do. We do it every day. I don’t know what you mean by indulging. That is our job. This is what we do and we do it everyday. Make sure certain people can demonstrate peacefully.” 
Many of the protestors who have been arrested feel as though their rights have been violated. Because of this a large class action lawsuit has been filed by the Partnership for Civil Justice fund. This class action suit is related to the arrests made on the Brooklyn Bridge. 
Political Response to Protests 
“Obama is NOT a brown-skinned anti-war socialist who gives away free healthcare...you’re thinking of Jesus.”
The protests have not only gotten the  attention of the media, but political officials have also geared their attention towards the protests. 
Nancy Pelosi, a house minority leader said “God bless them for their spontaneity. It’s independent... it’s young, it’s spontaneous, and it’s focused. And it’s going to be effective.” 
The Republican presidential candidate Gary Johnson also agree’s with the protesting. “Everybody is outraged over the inequity and I hope it gets focused on the fact that government perhaps is at the root of all of this, politicians are at the root of this,” said Johnson during an interview with CNN.
Although some political candidates agree with the protesting and hope for change, many have problems with it. 
Mayor Michael Bloomberg doesn’t just disagree with the what the protestors have to say, but he believes the protestors are going to ruin jobs in New York. "If you focus for example on driving the banks out of New York City, you know those are our jobs. What they’re trying to do is take away the jobs of people working in the city, take away the tax base that we have,” the mayor said. 
As the protest grows in size, more and more political people are commenting on the events taking place.
Growing in Size
“I won’t believe corporations are people until Texas executes one.”
The occupation has spread to over a thousand cities. October 15th, right before the month anniversary of the protest’s start, global action day was enacted. This called for people all over the country, and the world, to march for the cause. Prior to global action day the number of protestors had already gained volume. Many of the goals are the same as those in New York, other differ. 
I hope that this will help the government to see that the people are tired of electing officials just to have them pander to Wall Street. As far as our local movement, as I said previously, we are still discussing what our local goals are. Obviously, we support the movement in New York and everywhere else, but we haven't really chiseled out our individual group's goals yet,” Said Chrystal Zimmerman who is occupying in Amarillo, Texas.
The growth is thanks to the media, as well as social networking sites, and the internet.
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It is unclear whether or not the protests have yet to bring about change in the political sphere. The protests have however grown in size significantly in one month, and because of this there has been a lot of attention devoted to these protests. Only time will tell if changes will be made. 

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Anecdotal Leads

As Its Economy Sprints Ahead, China's People are Left Behind by David Barboza's, A Flagging Tribune, Tales of a Bankrupt Culture, by David Carr's (both in the New York Times), and Post Cards from the Cutting Edge by Wendy Lee (Star Tribune), are three articles that have strong anecdotal leads. 
The leads of these three stories all have a smaller story regarding the person that the news is affecting or the person that is making the news. After looking for anecdotal leads, I now know that I prefer them.
I feel that in each of these articles the anecdotal lead really grabs the attention of the reader. When I am browsing through a bunch of articles and looking for the most interesting ones, I often find my eyes glazing over because there are so many hard news leads that cover the who, where, when, why, and how. The anecdotal lead stands out because they are harder to find, so when I do stumble across one it catches my eye and I often read on. Also, they are more relatable to the reader. I much rather lead a quirky story about someone that is making the news rather than a sentence in which the information is all jumbled into one.
I also believe that the style of the authors writing is more transparent in an anecdotal news lead. This is nice because often times reporters are supposed to stick to such a specific guideline that their voice can be lost. 
I think the main purpose of an an anecdotal lead is to catch the eye of the reader. Sorcha’s story about The Bean was ten times more interesting when she had the anecdotal lead because it was funny, and it made me want to find out why the contractor from Starbucks had arrived. These three articles all accomplish that goal. Barboza’s article paints a picture of a Chinese family using a lot of imagery but still tying it back to the story at hand. I thought Barboza’s lead was the strongest although the other two were successful as well.  

Sunday, October 2, 2011

Revised Work Study Article

Students Greatly Affected by Cutbacks in Work Study
By Jolie Peters
New York, Ny-- Students at The New School have had an extremely difficult time getting jobs through the work study program due to cutbacks in money allocated for work study which occurred at the beginning of this fiscal aid year thanks to cuts made in the congressional budget package. 
  
From the start of the 2011/12 school year rumors have been surfacing around the school, because it was becoming increasingly hard to find jobs, that the work study program had been cut entirely. 

“Though I applied to many places I only received replies from two places,”  said Diana Araujo, a student at The New School who was unable to find a job through work study. “I was told that someone had already been hired for an office assistant position and an interview was arranged for a Spanish tutoring position, but I was not hired.”
The program still exists. However, due to a decrease in money provided for the program which comes from the federal government’s budget package, the job opportunities have greatly decreased. 
According to Elliot Anderson, the assistant director of financial aid at The New school, the jobs offered through work study ran out about a month ago. Because the money from the federal government decreased, The New School gave out less money to each department and therefore the departments had less job openings because they couldn’t afford to pay the same amount of people. 
It was much easier to get jobs through work study in the past few years because of the work study act which was passed in 2009 by congress.  Universities in the United States were given more fiscal aid by the government for campus based programs. These programs include work study, perkins loans, and the Federal opportunity grant which are all forms of financial aid. Although the money was allocated in 2009 some schools, including The New School, chose to split the aid in half and use some for the 2010/11 school year. The universities always have the same base amount of money for campus based programs. They are sometimes given another amount on top of that base which is determined yearly by the congressional budget package and is subject to fluctuation. The Work Study Act gave out money to universities to use on top of that base amount. This which allowed for more job opportunities in 2009/2010 school years. That money has run out, and The New School is now back to only having the base amount of money for the campus based programs. 
Anderson explained that in the beginning of October the financial aid offices will be reassessing their aid. Those who have yet to use their work study aid will have their aid terminated. Then, the office will see who is still interested in working under the work study program. 
“Students who are still interested in jobs will be given more money, and then it will be up to them to start their job search,” said Anderson.
Free Application for Federal Student Aid (FAFSA) does have a hand in determining how much universities will get for work study programs. A student’s FAFSA profile determines the financial need of the student, which allows the schools to determine their eligibility for work study. Also, by looking at FAFSA profiles, FAFSA is able to determining the financial need of a student body as a whole. They can then allocate more money for programs, such as work study, to schools who have a large body of students in need. 
Jane Glickman, a spokesperson for FAFSA explained that if the specific university is not given more money because their student body as a whole does not reflect a great deal of need for financial aid, but specific students still need financial help, the universities are able to offer another campus based program or loan. FAFSA gives 70% of the money for these campus based programs, and the school is responsible for the other 30%.
“When the government passes a lower budget, we do everything we can to work with the school and accommodate the students in need” said Glickman.
Every year the students at The New School who were offered work study the year prior are automatically eligible for following years. The new students are offered based on their need. However, the jobs are on a first come first serve basis. If a new student applies to a job before a returning student and is given the position, the returning student will have to look elsewhere. 
Olivia Scalise, a sophomore at The New School, was offered money through the work study program last year and was able to find a job quickly. This year she was not able to, and the financial aid offices told her to look elsewhere for a job.
“The benefit of working through the schools work study program is the jobs are sensitive to the students needs,” said Scalise.
Students can check back on Collegecentral.com/newschool at the beginning of next semester to see the new job opportunities that may have opened up.